This is solid if you’re somewhat technical. I think it could be simplified with an overview at the beginning.

• Pick a desktop environment for testing and download the iso
• Format USB
• burn iso
• boot to usb
• test, repeat if necessary
• dual boot
• non dual boot
• MS equivalent programs

I feel like the focus jumps around. If they have already made the decision, no reason to list replacement programs.

Honestly, you might get some better results if you dropped it into AI and asked for a summary/less technical versions of what you wrote. Or it could just make you laugh.

This happened where I work. An inexperienced team was making changes to a shared code base. They made changes to make usernames case insensitive, without thinking about them ready being case sensitive. So if you logged in with user CAT123, you might get cat123’s info. And then I was left on the team that had to clean up their mess and find and understand the impact.